How Berryish of you! I like this Shaun, it's crisp and inviting, as if the reader is the day, welcomed to explore "nü rhythm, nü life" with you. Man, I wish I wasn't in San Marcos!
Reagan, spoken like one immersed in poetry. I agree, crisp and inviting. I like it too. I especially like the way you broke up the lines. The final one–word line, "me," rings out in my mind when I read it–I am hanging on it. The poem is a call to the reader.
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How Berryish of you! I like this Shaun, it's crisp and inviting, as if the reader is the day, welcomed to explore "nü rhythm, nü life" with you. Man, I wish I wasn't in San Marcos!
Keep posting these man, take care.
Reagan, spoken like one immersed in poetry. I agree, crisp and inviting. I like it too. I especially like the way you broke up the lines. The final one–word line, "me," rings out in my mind when I read it–I am hanging on it. The poem is a call to the reader.
thanks for including me.
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